Vision: Well thought out and I figure this is a photo that would have taken some thought. The only thing I would have loved to see is the paper be more on fire.
Originality: I have seen photos done like this before, but its still a unique take on a portrait. The overall color and mood of the scene gives me the impact that this was a very sketchy area. Normally I have seen these kinds of shots in wide open city places, so I really like your take here.
Technique: Everything looks alright here technically. It would be awesome to see some more use of lights being added in, something to make the person more defined or make the fire appear hotter and bright (Flashes with CTO or Red gels would be a thought) but for whats in the photo its a good example of technique.
Impact: This is a good image. I would have loved to have seen some more fire in the paper though. That would have really taken this from good to great. Add a sense of danger and it would blow people away.
Well thought out and I figure this is a photo that would have taken some thought. The only thing I would have loved to see is the paper be more on fire.
Originality:
I have seen photos done like this before, but its still a unique take on a portrait. The overall color and mood of the scene gives me the impact that this was a very sketchy area. Normally I have seen these kinds of shots in wide open city places, so I really like your take here.
Technique:
Everything looks alright here technically. It would be awesome to see some more use of lights being added in, something to make the person more defined or make the fire appear hotter and bright (Flashes with CTO or Red gels would be a thought) but for whats in the photo its a good example of technique.
Impact:
This is a good image. I would have loved to have seen some more fire in the paper though. That would have really taken this from good to great. Add a sense of danger and it would blow people away.
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